Have to ask, are you a water sign, Autumn Blossom? I am - Scorpio - and anything having to do with water, particularly poems that summon water, wiggle into my psyche.
This speaks to me in a primal way. Water - flowing, falling, evaporating - all of it is part of my DNA. I was raised on a tributary of the Chesapeake Bay in Virginia. I live on a lake now. I live in Florida, a peninsula surrounded by water. We have air that is mostly water!
Water calls, speaks, whispers, and screams to me. And, so does your poem.